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What About: People Roulette Girls

George What About: People Roulette Girls

George asks…

Which is more appealing to publishers or readers?

These are two ideas I have posted up here before and I would just like to know witch has more potential to be published and which one’s demograpic is larger.(im on my sisters account right now)

So I am a young aspiring author and I was just wondering if this sounds like a good premise for a series of novels. Each novel will follow a fictional teenage or twenty something dealing with a surprise pregnancy. The 1st book will have a girl who just lost her boyfriend in a school shooting and finds out she is pregnant with her baby. The 2nd book will have a girl who’s mother has wanted nothing more but for her to get into an ivy league school, she is accepted to the school of her choice but she is not interested in going to that school she is planning on using her tuition money and moving to New York with her boyfriend, but before she goes she finds out she is pregnant. The third book will involve a girl who is around 20 who is living with HIV and finds out that her random hook up with her old highschool bf gets her pregnant.

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The title will be “Rushing Roulette” I know that Russian roulette is the real way to say it but this is a play on that. So the idea is about this girl named Viola and she is seeming normal, a college student, has a boyfriend and friends until she feels like she no longer holds control over her life because she is raped by a co worker. She remebers stories that her grandfather told her about his war buddies playing Russian Roullete and decides gets the idea to play the ultimate game of Roulette. She is going to pick 6 people who have some connection to the rapist and spins the barrell once and shoots at each of them and she believes that she is like a “god”. But in the twist of the ending her boyfriend finds the gun and thinks it is a fake gun so he shoots it at her jokingly and then he realizes that he has killed her. Then I thought I would do a little bit of him trying to cover up the murder and then he realizes her scheme and thats about as far as I’ve thought it out.

Thanks so much positive and negative feedback welcome!

lucky zieht 200 What About: People Roulette Girls

publi answers:

Ok, here’s the thing: i like the second one. I would be interested in reading it. However, i don’t find it believable that her boyfriend thinks the gun is fake. Why would he think that? It doesn’t really make sense to me. And even if he did think it was fake, the fact that he would pretend to shoot her is really just terrible. I don’t really know how you want to portray him, but if he were a good person and a good boyfriend, he would not have pretended to shoot her as a funny little joke.
Other than that, i really like the idea. It’s creepy in a kind of fun way, eh?

Laura What About: People Roulette Girls

Laura asks…

CONFUSED what should I do?

These are two ideas I have posted up here before and I would just like to know witch has more potential to be published and which one’s demograpic is larger.(im on my sisters account right now)

So I am a young aspiring author and I was just wondering if this sounds like a good premise for a series of novels. Each novel will follow a fictional teenage or twenty something dealing with a surprise pregnancy. The 1st book will have a girl who just lost her boyfriend in a school shooting and finds out she is pregnant with her baby. The 2nd book will have a girl who’s mother has wanted nothing more but for her to get into an ivy league school, she is accepted to the school of her choice but she is not interested in going to that school she is planning on using her tuition money and moving to New York with her boyfriend, but before she goes she finds out she is pregnant. The third book will involve a girl who is around 20 who is living with HIV and finds out that her random hook up with her old highschool bf gets her pregnant.

or

The title will be “Rushing Roulette” I know that Russian roulette is the real way to say it but this is a play on that. So the idea is about this girl named Viola and she is seeming normal, a college student, has a boyfriend and friends until she feels like she no longer holds control over her life because she is raped by a co worker. She remebers stories that her grandfather told her about his war buddies playing Russian Roullete and decides gets the idea to play the ultimate game of Roulette. She is going to pick 6 people who have some connection to the rapist and spins the barrell once and shoots at each of them and she believes that she is like a “god”. But in the twist of the ending her boyfriend finds the gun and thinks it is a fake gun so he shoots it at her jokingly and then he realizes that he has killed her. Then I thought I would do a little bit of him trying to cover up the murder and then he realizes her scheme and thats about as far as I’ve thought it out.

Thanks so much positive and negative feedback welcome!

lucky zieht 200 What About: People Roulette Girls

publi answers:

I like both ideas. If I saw either of them I would probably consider reading them, because they both sound like they would be really interesting.

Susan What About: People Roulette Girls

Susan asks…

Thoughts Negative and Positive! Most constructive gets best answer?

The title will be “Rushing Roulette” I know that Russian roulette is the real way to say it but this is a play on that. So the idea is about this girl named Viola and she is seeming normal, a college student, has a boyfriend and friends until she feels like she no longer holds control over her life. She remebers stories that her grandfather told her about his war buddies playing Russian Roullete and decides gets the idea to play the ultimate game of Roulette. She is going to pick 6 people at random and spin the trigger and shoot at each of them and she believes that she is like a “god”. But in the twist of the ending her boyfriend finds the gun and thinks it is a fake gun so he shoots it at her jokingly and then he realizes that he has killed her. Then I thought I would do a little bit of him trying to cover up the murder and then he realizes her scheme and thats about as far as I’ve thought about, a little dark I know but do you like it? Positive and negative feedback please?

lucky zieht 200 What About: People Roulette Girls

publi answers:

It’s an interesting thought, however the way you’ve described it seems a little difficult to follow.

I may start it off with a little background and then have her get shot and throughout the boyfriend trying to cover it up, the true past and intentions are revealed, the majority of the story being about this “puzzle” and not about the girl beforehand.

Steven What About: People Roulette Girls

Steven asks…

How should I start this…bad case of writers block?

The title will be “Rushing Roulette” I know that Russian roulette is the real way to say it but this is a play on that. So the idea is about this girl named Viola and she is seeming normal, a college student, has a boyfriend and friends until she feels like she no longer holds control over her life. She remebers stories that her grandfather told her about his war buddies playing Russian Roullete and decides gets the idea to play the ultimate game of Roulette. She is going to pick 6 people at random and spin the trigger and shoot at each of them and she believes that she is like a “god”. But in the twist of the ending her boyfriend finds the gun and thinks it is a fake gun so he shoots it at her jokingly and then he realizes that he has killed her. Then I thought I would do a little bit of him trying to cover up the murder and then he realizes her scheme and thats about as far as I’ve thought about, a little dark I know but do you like it?What should the opening scene be or ideas for the first chapter… writers block again ugghh Positive and negative feedback please?

lucky zieht 200 What About: People Roulette Girls

publi answers:

I think she should be the one to shoot and kill the boyfriend. Your character, no matter how dark, has to come full circle in a story. Killing her off like that is going to leave the reader feeling unsatisfied. And remember that all characters, good or evil, need to be well rounded with motivation. If your character thinks she is a god, elaborate on that and on why she feels that this is the best thing to do. She may even have to learn something after killing the boyfriend.

If you are having trouble starting it, then maybe you need to take sometime away from it. Don’t force the idea. And while you are waiting for that moment to write let the imagination run wild and I am sure you will think of great twists and possibly a great beginning.

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